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I remember you
crawled into my bed at night
even though
you were supposed to be on the floor.

Wrapped your arms around me
I turned around
and put my hand
where your heart was.

We were flawed.
It made us perfect.

It's midnight.
I'm at the beach.
The round bright moon creates white ripples
on the cold, foamless sea water.
My feet are enveloped in ice and thick, floating sand.
The black sky is carelessly splattered with stars.

I remember, we were here.
You were there.

A mass of flesh and bone.
I had on your jacket
even though it wasn't cold.

It is now.








©2008-2009 *Pawed
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Author's Comments

I know it might be hard to understand, but they didn't break up, he died.

I guess people enjoyed this one?

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:iconcoca84:
don't delete it. it's fantastic. kudos. :glomp:

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And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss gazes also into you - Nietzsche
:iconshadedsorrow:
Don't delete it! I love it! :heart:
:iconpawed:
Thank you!
I was worried it sounded weird.
:iconpawed:
Thank you so much!
:iconsayhayleyy:
oh wow, i really love this :]

--
I don't have talent, I have perspective.
~ShortStackStories
:iconxravaging:
No, don't delete this. This is beautiful! :heart:

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:iconninva:
I like it. Good job. (:

--
Writing is like going to the bathroom; once you start you just can't stop.
:icondaaseriador:
man, that's powerful.
the last two lines, especially.
keep writing, dude.

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